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Apis Dea's avatar

Great read 📚

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Gillian Fletcher's avatar

This was a wonderful read—I liked the way the narrator was too distracted by his own reality to notice until he couldn’t turn away from the truth!

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

I love that the other beings' 'shells' included bad sci-fi effects like a bad cut, it made it fun and sorta ethereal with the almost noir/pulpy (in a good way) voice of the narrator. I very much had the feeling that I was reading something from an old science fiction treasury, the kind on newsprint paper.

Is the narrator unreliable in his telling, or am I putting that on this?

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Victor Jimenez's avatar

He is definitely unreliable until the end, after his encounter.

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M.P. Fitzgerald's avatar

That's what I suspected. His conspiratorial thinking feels like a logical trauma response to Laura's death and his inability to save her.

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